Peer Review
As I presented my magazine to my classmates', I got the chance to get valuable feedback. At first when I looked back at what I've previously done, I have realized my format for my feature article was not how I wanted it to be. I got great suggestions such as to make my text into columns instead of horizontal and I really liked that idea. When looking back at my magazine I also noticed how my content page was off centered, so I had to fix that. They also suggested to fill the page more to make it look fuller. Not only that but, to change the numbers for they would not be from 1,2,3,4 etc. to more like 3,6,8,10. For my cover page, they recommended me to change the blue and red into just one color. Not only that but to put the selling lines into shapes for example, bubbles. This will help it pop out more. Another thing would be to make it more like a magazine than a book. When they told me...
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